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JUST A DREAM
Contributed by
LILLYJANE
on
Friday, 18th May 2007 @ 08:58:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
mystical
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Last night I had a dream,
I was in a beautiful place,
there amid some Angels,
I saw your smiling face,
I could smell a beautiful fragrance,
like lavender in spring,
your eyes shone like diamonds,
on your beautiful translucent skin,
I hugged you and I kissed you,
could feel your arms hug me
you were happy, you were laughing,
it felt so good to see,
when I awoke, a tear was on my cheek,
it was a tear of happiness, at last we got to meet,
as I drifted back I heard you softly say,
this wont be forever ,we will meet again one day
some people may say, that was just a dream,
I will smile and say, not all is what it seems.
Copyright ©
LILLYJANE
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2007-05-18 20:58:43]
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Re: JUST A DREAM
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by needledancing on
Saturday, 19th May 2007 @ 01:57:05 PM AEST
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Your dream reminds me of similar dreams I have had. Makes you wonder if this person will cross your path in this world.
Lovely piece. |
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Re: JUST A DREAM
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 20th May 2007 @ 11:16:05 PM AEST
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lilly, oh, if we could all have dreams such as this, let
them never end!! Beautiful, in words and in sentiments.
This held such a comfort within it. Like a soft breeze on
a warm summer day, or a tight hug from a friend when
you're feeling down . . .
lovely work.
~Breezy |
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Re: JUST A DREAM
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by funnyface09 on
Wednesday, 4th July 2007 @ 07:58:01 PM AEST
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i have not dream of similar things but i wrote something like that a few times...
if only we can jump into our dreams once a while,then it will feel so good...
thanks for sharing..is really nice... |
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