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Night Visions
Contributed by
deadheadpoet
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Friday, 18th May 2007 @ 04:12:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Spring rains wash away winter blues
Everything is coming to life
Blooming with multiple colors
throughout the green
Breathe deeply for the air is full and moist
Lungs inspire and expire
Rejoicing in the ability
of life and existence
2:00 am and the train whistle
blows out its' familiar tune
Miles away she rambles on
Sounds of life familiar
Darkness ensconces the farm
Shadows fall deeply around
All is hushed and quiet
Earth, sky and I... all woven into one
May 2007
Laura Horner
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2007-05-18 16:12:57]
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Re: Night Visions
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by scrivonel on
Friday, 18th May 2007 @ 08:55:16 PM AEST
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Nice poem. I especially liked the second stanza.
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Re: Night Visions
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 19th May 2007 @ 02:28:35 AM AEST
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Oh sis, I love how you write, not just of becoming one with
nature, but of being really and truly engulfed by it. This was such
a beautiful image. I was captured with your very first line ...
I know this sense of calmness and the brilliance of Mother
Earth when all is quiet. You have drawn the picture with an
exquisite array of colours. An absolutely flawless and
stunning display, hun.
always, many hugs to you
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Re: Night Visions
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by shelby on
Saturday, 19th May 2007 @ 08:10:22 AM AEST
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sis,
I felt such a tender breath of calm and freshness throughout this write. Calming and peaceful, I could smell the faint drops of rain and hear the trainswhistle. Lovely write
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Re: Night Visions
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 28th May 2007 @ 11:45:20 AM AEST
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oooo! sooo beautiful! i adore that picture, and your poem, wow and wow,
hugs n' love nessa
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