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Sorry
Contributed by
SuicidalSon
on
Thursday, 27th February 2003 @ 04:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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You can see me
but you can't look inside
You can touch me
but you can't feel inside
I can see you
why do you try to hide
I can feel you
all thats left behind
Well can you hear me
no whispers loud I cried
And you held me
I know that you have tried
Now I'm sorry
I'm sorry that I died
I said I'm sorry
Copyright ©
SuicidalSon
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2003-02-27 16:20:00]
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Re: Sorry
(User Rating: 1 )
by M on
Thursday, 6th March 2003 @ 11:41:59 AM AEST
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| the last 'verse' is really, i don't know, really 'powerful', i think, not sure bout the last line, but its ok. i really like this poem, its short, but really good. |
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Re: Sorry
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 15th May 2015 @ 02:29:06 PM AEST
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| Yes...that last verse had me wondering... is he sorry now?? |
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