Your Poetry Dot Com

Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!

Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+

Custom Search


Welcome !	Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link	25-November 02:14:09 AEST

Menu

· Our eBay Store

· Error Submit

Poetry

· Submit Poetry

· Least Read Poems

· Members Listing

· Old Site Post 2001

· Old Site Pre 2001

· Poetry Archive

· Public Domain Poetry

Stories

· Stories (NEW ! )

· Submit Story

· Story Topics

· Stories Archive

· Story Search

Community

· Our Poetry Forums

· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

Site Help

· FAQ

· Feedback

Members Areas

· Your Account

· Members Journals

· Premium Sign-Up

Premium Section

· Special Section

· Premium Poems

· Premium Submit

· Premium Search

· Premium Archive

· Premium Topics

Fun & Games

· Jokes

· Bubble Puzzle

· Cross Word Easy

· Word Hunt

Reference

· Dictionary (Rhyming)

· Site Updates

· Special Content

Search

Top

Help This Site

· Donations

Others

· Moderators

Our Other Sites

· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

Social

Revenge

Contributed by trackiller2006 on Thursday, 17th May 2007 @ 11:56:57 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

The darkness closes around my vision
The pain I have felt for so long returns ten-fold
Perhaps it is my punishment for being so selfish for all of these years
For destroying the lives and maiming the trust of everyone who ever cared for me
The family members that I have lied to…
The friends that I have stabbed in the back…
The lovers that I have deceived and been unfaithful to…
The karma of my actions has finally caught up with me
My family has turned its back on me
My friends have all shut me out of their lives
And I am alone, with no one to love
The world has turned its back on me
But…I do not care in the slightest
This world means nothing to me
If I had the power, I would have destroyed it long ago
Yet…I was too weak
Now, my life has come to an end
With my last gasp of breath I curse the world and pray that it will be obliterated
My vision fades into complete darkness and my thoughts and heartbeat ceases
My body grows cold
Suddenly a gasp of breath escapes my dead lungs
My eyes focus on the stars in the nighttime sky
Strength surges throughout my body and I stand up
I feel power coursing through my being
The power to destroy…
The power to maim…
The power to kill…
Power that will let me take back what was taken from me
To exact my revenge on all of the people who hurt me when I was a child
All of the foster parents who didn’t care about me and left me to fend for myself
All of the family members that left me for dead when I needed them the most
Their comeuppance will come ten-fold and they will know the hell I have been through for my entire life
And when they reach out toward me for help, to quench the fires that torment them, I will spit in their face and laugh at the misery that they have brought upon themselves
As their bodies give out on them and the light begins to fade from their eyes, I will snatch that soul and place it back in the body from whence it came and begin my torture again
For all eternity, theses souls will be with me in the hell I have built for them from my own mind
The mind of a madman…
The mind of a killer…
The mind of Death…

Copyright Â© trackiller2006 ... [ 2007-05-17 11:56:57]
(Date/Time posted on site)

Advertisments:

Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem

Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more

All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.

Re: Revenge (User Rating: 1 )
by chrono110 on Saturday, 9th June 2007 @ 02:17:48 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

I love it! You paint such vivid pictures.

Sherre

While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. Â©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright Â© to their submitter. All the rest Copyright Â© 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com