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Falling
Contributed by
zenith66
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Thursday, 17th May 2007 @ 10:31:19 AM in AEST
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Again
You’ve fallen again, and this
Time you will not rise,
Yes you will surely try, but
No life burns in those deathly eyes,
The pieces of your broken soul,
Filled with grief and pain,
Have tumbled deeper still into the hole,
With scarred humanity, your heart is stained,
These troubles thoughts, swimming through your mind,
Have not befell you at your will
Like before you may have tried to find
Your heart, has not the strength to kill
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zenith66
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2007-05-17 10:31:19]
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Re: Falling
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by scrivonel on
Thursday, 17th May 2007 @ 11:35:08 PM AEST
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Good poem. I liked this line:
With scarred humanity, your heart is stained
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Re: Falling
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 16th June 2007 @ 01:48:01 AM AEST
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zenith, in all your writes, I sense a sad struggle ...
so damn emotive, my friend.
The lure of darkness grips us all at one time or another.
It feeds on our weakness and boosts our apathy,
until we feel the demons of pain and anguish are
acutally more comfortable than pleasure and warmth.
Never give in, never give up, but always keep writing!
Wonderful post!
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