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The Power Of A Smile
Contributed by
Willofree
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Thursday, 17th May 2007 @ 10:15:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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A smile spread across her face,
yet not just her lips smiled at me.
Her whole body filled with desire,
as she slowly approached.
Her beautiful eyes sparkled,
like the sun dancing upon the water.
She appeared like a goddess,
emerging from the sea.
My heart pounded within my chest,
like a wave tumbling upon the beach.
A surge of energy flowed within,
not a word was spoken.
They embraced with churning emotions,
like a giant wave crashing into the surf.
As two bodies merged into one,
an expression of total love and passion peaked.
Only when completed with exhaustion settling in,
did they look into each other's eyes again.
And with another radiant smile,
love calmed, like the setting sun ore a tranquil sea.
Copyright ©
Willofree
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2007-05-17 10:15:00]
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Re: The Power Of A Smile
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by emystar on
Thursday, 17th May 2007 @ 02:18:50 PM AEST
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Very beautifull write.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: The Power Of A Smile
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by deadheadpoet on
Friday, 18th May 2007 @ 03:08:31 AM AEST
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*fans self* OMG Will, that was so beautiful, so romantic. I felt myself truly become lost in the moment. The metaphors and similes delighted me...wonderful piece, my friend. (you lovebug you) *wink*
Peace and hugs,
Laura |
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Re: The Power Of A Smile
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 18th May 2007 @ 09:27:25 PM AEST
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Woooo that was awsome!!
Great buildup and very explosive.
One word I might change is "calmed" I wasn't sure if refered to cooled...or settled in, so to speak...hopeing the latter lol....again awsome piece! |
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Re: The Power Of A Smile
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 19th May 2007 @ 01:27:55 AM AEST
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Will, another work of tremendous art for us to savour both in heart
and mind. Wow! This was sensational. So much can be said
with a smile and you've done an exceptional job showing us
just one of those. I, myself smiled upon reading it. There is a
wonder within your words that sets the body on fire in the most
calm of ways. Completely and beautifully moving, my friend.
~Breezy |
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