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SUPER GLUE MY LOVE
Contributed by
MILLER_GENUINE_SWINE
on
Thursday, 17th May 2007 @ 08:04:44 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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WHERE DO WE GO FROM HERE
HOW DO WE FACE OUR GREATEST FEAR
HOW CAN WE LOVE ONCE AGAIN
WHEN OUR LOVE IS FACED WITH SO MUCH SIN
HOW CAN WE SEE
THE GOOD INSIDE OF THEE
HOW CAN WE FEEL THE LOVE INSIDE
CAN OUR LOVE COENSIDE
DO WE DEPART
OR MAKE A START
SO MANY QUESTIONS COME FROM THE HEART
BUT AS FOR LOVING YOU ,IT'S JUST ONE PART
DO WE DENY THE FEELINGS WE HAVE
OR LICK OUR WOUNDS AND PUT ON SAV (SAUVE?)
CAN WE REALLY GO ON TO BE TOGETHER
OR IS THIS JUST A REALITY THAT WILL NEVER
NEVER BE WHAT WE NEED ,NEVER BE RIGHT
NEVER BE GOOD AND ALWAYS FIGHT
CAN YOU LOVE ME THIS IS ALL I WANT TO KNOW
GIVE ME AN ANSWER SO I CAN STAY OR GO
LOVE ME NOW OR LEAVE ME FOR GOOD
I KNOW WHAT I SAY IS ALWAYS MISUNDERSTOOD
BUT I CAN'T HELP IT I HAVE ALWAYS LOVED YOU
YOU ARE MY BOND TO LIFE ,MY SUPER GLUE
Copyright ©
MILLER_GENUINE_SWINE
... [
2007-05-17 08:04:44]
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Re: SUPER GLUE MY LOVE
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by Shadow on
Saturday, 19th May 2007 @ 06:37:17 PM AEST
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i found this one to be cute. It made me smile i must say. Now, the flow was a bit off in some spots but if you changed the words at all the meaning would be lost. I would sujest perhpase condencing it all and apllying metaphors. This would give a deeper level to the poem. Personal adivce though, if the person you are with make you feel like there is little hope, you need to talk to them about it. This is where most couples fail. Good write and if you are facing this problem, you are in my thoughts. blessed be
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Re: SUPER GLUE MY LOVE
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 23rd July 2010 @ 11:19:57 PM AEST
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| Get married and dont live in sin. The poem needs more depth, try not to focus too much on making an A B A B rhyme scheme. Focus more on what you want to say then figure out how to express it |
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