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Jake Dreams

Contributed by RaineBurkhart on Wednesday, 16th May 2007 @ 10:45:14 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Thoughts linger within my mind,
Knowing that the love you gave was the hardest one to find,
Within a few days you asked to be one,
I said without thinking what i had done,
She had cheated on you not to long ago,
And him and i had grown apart, and now we'll never know,
So much stuff we had shared,
So many secrets i left to bare,
I went with you to almost every place,
Just so i could be will you and see your wonderful face,
It's times like these, the too good to be true,
That end up braking your heart, and not knowing what to do,
A couple weeks pass and our relationship is great,
Not knowing whatever is on your mind, not knowing what you think,
You tell me in a day or two that everything is alright,
But you know my heart is not okay, it's not so very bright,
You finally tell me that it would be better, if we were apart,
And that our relationship is through,
You say that you're sorry for wasting my time,
I say the same back to you,
So as we turn to walk our ways,
I know that in time i'll be fine,
I'llcarry your love in my heart until the day i die.

Copyright © RaineBurkhart ... [ 2007-05-16 22:45:14]
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Re: Jake Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by Valerie_Pearson on Thursday, 17th May 2007 @ 02:47:44 AM AEST
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Raine,
The sweet softness of a gentle broken young heart, Oh' to be young again and free to love whom ever thee heart wishes, though your heart will always caring the memories, life is a joy to be, make it a great one, Love reading your poetry, young "Poetess", take care Valerie

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