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Under The Raspberry Sky
Contributed by
honey56
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Wednesday, 16th May 2007 @ 09:20:51 AM in AEST
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Standing looking up at a raspberry
Sky..
While moonbeams twinkle from
Above..
I hear the calling of the nightingale
Cry..
Under the raspberry sky
Lights are flickering ….
The nightingale calling, calling
Under the raspberry sky…….
While moonbeams trickles down
From above..
With such a sweet melody coming
From afar..
While standing under the raspberry
Sky..
The melodies scatter in the wind
With such a beautiful delight
The nightingale is calling, calling
From afar..
Under the raspberry sky...
Copyright ©
honey56
... [
2007-05-16 09:20:51]
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Re: Under The Raspberry Sky
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 16th May 2007 @ 11:28:19 AM AEST
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Calm falls over me when reading this. You did a great job with this.
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Re: Under The Raspberry Sky
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by Whisper on
Thursday, 17th May 2007 @ 05:51:48 AM AEST
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Good flow . Nice write
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Re: Under The Raspberry Sky
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by Crow on
Thursday, 17th May 2007 @ 08:26:26 AM AEST
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| This is very well done, enjoyed this very much! Vincent |
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Re: Under The Raspberry Sky
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by myheartsvoice on
Thursday, 17th May 2007 @ 12:29:29 PM AEST
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What a sweet and beautiful poem this is. you
are good poet. so delicate like a little water color painting. sweet indeed. take care . . .
Ben |
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Re: Under The Raspberry Sky
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 23rd May 2007 @ 09:17:30 AM AEST
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love the title, sweet peaceful poem...
love n' hugs nessa |
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Re: Under The Raspberry Sky
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by DeeMeister on
Sunday, 10th June 2007 @ 11:37:41 PM AEST
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| A loevly and serene poem. |
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Re: Under The Raspberry Sky
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by SpecialK on
Thursday, 29th July 2010 @ 09:48:08 PM AEST
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| Calming yet intense. Great job |
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