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Love Lost?
Contributed by
airhead
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Wednesday, 16th May 2007 @ 07:06:36 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I know that we are soulmates
We think a lot the same
Have we lost all that now
When we have so much to gain
I値l always be right here for you
I can稚 promise anything less
I can only promise love
Understanding and a sweet caress
I want to talk to you
Tell you of my love
Do I have to keep it to myself
And talk to the stars above
Maybe one day you値l hear
As I talk in my head to you
You値l realise what we致e lost
And send a message through
I know I値l always love you
Maybe you will too
But I guess it値l never be
Again just me & you
Copyright ツゥ
airhead
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2007-05-16 07:06:36] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Love Lost?
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Wednesday, 16th May 2007 @ 11:30:32 AM AEST (User
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Overall the poem is really good, nice flow and rhyme..... beautiful to read and I hope all works for you
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Re: Love Lost?
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 6th June 2007 @ 09:37:09 PM AEST (User
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bittersweet longing, written from deep inside, you have turned unrequited love into beauty,
love n' hugs nessa
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