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Your The Love In Loveliness . . . Ben
Contributed by
myheartsvoice
on
Wednesday, 16th May 2007 @ 02:16:07 AM in AEST
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I love who i see
every time i awake
'tis justice you do for myne eyes,
your my cup of tea make no mistake
your heart is my
paradise.
I love who you are
both inside and out i love what i feel with
you,
treating you right is what life's all about
your what i was born to
do.
I love how your eyes
tell me they care like i'm all
they needed to see,
you make i love you sound like a prayer
whenever you speak to
me.
I
love who you are
when your with me
forever my heart you'll posess,
your beauty transends reality
your the love in
loveliness.
I love who you are
in so many ways where to begin
i don't know,
and so i'll just start right here in my heart
where always i've love'd you
so.
Ben
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myheartsvoice
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2007-05-16 02:16:07]
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Re: Your The Love In Loveliness . . . Ben
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 16th May 2007 @ 11:36:23 AM AEST
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Ben my friend this is once again a true feeling of love, you always capture your inner most feelings. Nicely done.
huggles from ur puggles lol
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Re: Your The Love In Loveliness . . . Ben
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by deadheadpoet on
Wednesday, 16th May 2007 @ 12:41:05 PM AEST
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Awww this made me all teary eyed and choked up. I wish I could hug both you and your wife. You give hope that love is forever and it can make it if you really want it to. Your love is beautiful, raw, and never ending Ben. Every piece you write, I always think, how very lucky your wife and you both are. Thank you for sharing with us your undying love.
Much peace and love my dearest brother...
Your hippie sis,
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Re: Your The Love In Loveliness . . . Ben
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 16th May 2007 @ 02:04:54 PM AEST
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Beautifull as always, my friend.
awesome writing.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Your The Love In Loveliness . . . Ben
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by Ihop on
Thursday, 17th May 2007 @ 12:12:16 AM AEST
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Ben,
What a Beautiful write.
It touched me.
Keep up the good work |
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Re: Your The Love In Loveliness . . . Ben
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by PhantomVampyress on
Thursday, 17th May 2007 @ 04:39:44 AM AEST
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another beautiful devotional write from you.. this is so original yet so shakespearin like. beautiful job
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: Your The Love In Loveliness . . . Ben
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 21st May 2007 @ 10:17:22 AM AEST
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oh Ben, again you have captured the essence of love
and spread it on the page with the loveliest of words . . .
and that title..oh my, it's simply stunning, my friend.
gorgeous Ben. So softly gorgeous!
~Breezy |
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Re: Your The Love In Loveliness . . . Ben
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 23rd May 2007 @ 07:15:29 AM AEST
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i always know where to read beautiful heartfelt love, thank you for sharing, i feel like im peeking in and quite honored:)
love n' hugs nessa |
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Re: Your The Love In Loveliness . . . Ben
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by needledancing on
Wednesday, 23rd May 2007 @ 03:39:51 PM AEST
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| A wonderful loving song of joy...I envy the joy that runs through your brain and into your hand and out of your pen. Greart job my loving poet. |
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