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Mistaken
Contributed by
ihop
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Wednesday, 16th May 2007 @ 02:00:21 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Here I stand with my sword in hand
Controling my life at risk
The village is mad, and after me
I take my stand and ball my fist
I am ready to kill and that i will
To whomever walks through thy door
I am ***** off at thy king
I cant take it anymore
his fat ass head and mighty belly
Scared everyone but me
You call me insane but that is my name
I am quick on my feet
He walks through the door and swings his sword
His life is surely taken
He crys for help but no one comes
He was surely mistaken
Copyright ©
ihop
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2007-05-16 02:00:21]
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Re: Mistaken
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 16th May 2007 @ 11:39:18 AM AEST
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Packed with punch!
I have a sword too want to fight? LOL
All kidding aside, I really liked this it carried along, nice flow to it as well plus it told of a story unfolding right before my eyes. Good job
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Re: Mistaken
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by myheartsvoice on
Thursday, 17th May 2007 @ 02:23:34 AM AEST
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Ahh yes a ribold tale from the woods of sherewood forrest king arthur days of old mighty heroic. I realy liked this quite unique my friend. Very nice.
thank u also 4 your comment i appreciate it.
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Re: Mistaken
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by Daniellemarie on
Wednesday, 28th July 2010 @ 11:47:12 PM AEST
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| I like this alot alittle hard to follow because its your very own perception and I like that you keep it kind of mysterious Im a bad speller so exuse me plz lol its a good piece all in all |
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