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Forgotten
Contributed by
deadheadpoet
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Tuesday, 15th May 2007 @ 03:07:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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How could you hurt another
this way?
How could you do
this deed?
When you tell someone
how much you love them,
How could you have
shared your seed?
Where was your lover in your mind?
Somewhere locked far behind?
Forgotten
Your children; forgotten
All were simply...
Forgotten
You were someone else
cruel and calculating.
Smile so perfectly,
always melting with your eyes.
Beautiful face
merely a disguise.
Some torture lies beneath,
something that ached to come out.
Horrid choices you made
Whilst family were.....
forgotten
What's that all about?
Written April 2, 2007
Laura Horner
Copyright ©
deadheadpoet
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2007-05-15 15:07:43]
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Re: Forgotten
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 15th May 2007 @ 03:34:30 PM AEST
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Sis,
this write touches the very soul and wounded heart. It is a hard thing to understand . You wrote this with a tenderness and undertones of pain that I clearly feel.
hugs her sis
~Michelle~ |
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Re: Forgotten
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by RaineBurkhart on
Tuesday, 15th May 2007 @ 10:12:58 PM AEST
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That is amazing it really make me think of how my parent forget me alot and how people let me down alot. I love it!
RAINE |
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Re: Forgotten
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by Crow on
Tuesday, 15th May 2007 @ 11:32:35 PM AEST
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| excellent work my friend, I know it comes right from your heart. Vincent |
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Re: Forgotten
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Wednesday, 16th May 2007 @ 04:03:21 AM AEST
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I have to agree with your author's note.. I always think about this and how others can just do that to someone.. This reminded me of what my ex boyfriend had did to me.. This was a very powerful poem and held alot of truth in it.. Great job..
Take care
Christina |
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Re: Forgotten
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Wednesday, 16th May 2007 @ 04:03:21 AM AEST
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I have to agree with your author's note.. I always think about this and how others can just do that to someone.. This reminded me of what my ex boyfriend had did to me.. This was a very powerful poem and held alot of truth in it.. Great job..
Take care
Christina |
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Re: Forgotten
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by PhantomVampyress on
Thursday, 17th May 2007 @ 04:45:06 AM AEST
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wow laurabean this is so true.. this is a wise heart felt write.. a beautiful expression and well worded piece of poetry here.. exquiste.. yet sooo sad..
vampyress Jenni |
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