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My Everything
Contributed by
babygirlholly
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Tuesday, 15th May 2007 @ 02:55:01 PM in AEST
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Nine months of unexpected days and one day of pure pain.... but nothing could have prepared me for that first day of pure happiness and love. Nothing prepared me for my life, for september 10th 2005 was the day my life had changed.
Beautiful hair of golden brown that lights up your face like a haylo that makes an angel glow. Eyes of the ocean gleaming so bright like the waters in a fantasy. Your smile is like the sun, giving such warmth and comfort to those lost in the dark, and skin so soft and fair like the freshly fallen snow on a cold winters day.
a soul so old yet so young with a life still to live.. you are my flower. You are my wind, my breath, my sun, and my moon. You are my sky, my day , and my night. You are my everything in this cruel world and the thing that keeps me strong. You are what gives me my will to keep moving forward even in the toughest of times. You are my precious daughter and i couldnt ask for a greater blessing.
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Re: My Everything
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by deadheadpoet on
Tuesday, 15th May 2007 @ 03:27:50 PM AEST
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Beautiful, beautiful write. You wrote this so elegantly. Just think one day your daughter will read this and I'm sure will be so proud of her mom. I have two children myself and the day they were born were two of the happiest days of my life. You have a few misspelled words in your write, but otherwise it is fabulous.
Peace and hugs.....enjoy that wonderful bond you have with your daughter.
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Re: My Everything
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 15th May 2007 @ 03:41:15 PM AEST
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Your love shines in this write, you are a very lucky woman.
Other than a couple errors or type O's ( happens to us all) the write is lovely and brings forth a well full of warmth and love.
~Michelle~ |
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