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White Swan (Haiku)
Contributed by
ramfire
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Tuesday, 15th May 2007 @ 12:31:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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White swan on the lake
Graceful bird so majestic
Regal dignity
Copyright ©
ramfire
... [
2007-05-15 00:31:00]
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Re: White Swan (Haiku)
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by deadheadpoet on
Tuesday, 15th May 2007 @ 02:50:19 AM AEST
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Beautiful. I love swans. They truly are a majestic bird.
Peace, Laura |
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Re: White Swan (Haiku)
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by 5MinutePoet on
Friday, 15th June 2007 @ 07:01:58 AM AEST
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| I think that the majority of haiku poetry owes much sucess to choosing a good topic, and this was a good topic. Simple and subtle, well done |
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Re: White Swan (Haiku)
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by Dom on
Friday, 27th July 2007 @ 04:46:27 AM AEST
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You do the majesty of swan justice with your beautiful haiku.
Nice read,
Dom |
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