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The Serpent and the Naif
Contributed by
heartquake
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Monday, 14th May 2007 @ 03:44:45 AM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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She spun so free from worry and the harm of knavery
Her free spirit is the only thing overshadowing her bravery
She didn't know much of the world around her and in her dreams
But her life was molded from experiencing simplicities
She danced daily and all through the night with ease
Her hair flew about in smooth serenity like the most golden breeze
She danced far from her home although it was never planned
And into a depressed, dark village all but forgotten by man
She danced upon a hill top overlooking the town
Her dancing stopped as her face prepared for it's first frown
She soon realized this was no average gloomy borough
She heard cries and tears that hit the cold ground with sorrow
She skipped down the hill into the village and met a man
An older gent with a long white beard, barely able to stand
She helped him to a seat and very gently she asked,
"Why is this town so full of woe, and it's folk so aghast?"
"You see, my young dear," the man began to quietly speak
"It's not a hamlet that many wisened travelers set to seek,
We've been harassed by a snake whom we've learned to resent.
The black scaled, ivory toothed, most malicious of serpents."
She stepped back, 'tis just a snake' she thought to herself
She pondered why this village isn't thriving and booming with wealth
It was just a small reptile, but it has long kept this quiet place in fear
How could it keep such a place in grief and misfortune for so many years
She walked through the town, not ever once opting to leave
She knew she could try to help, even though she was naive
She never frightened a thing, nor staved off a raging beast
But she thought to herself "I must try to help at least."
She walked through an alley as cold and dark as night
Watching mothers with their children barely clinging to life
They all had two small discolored wounds just above their feet
About an inch or so apart all made from the same pair of teeth
She found herself in a quaint little park in the center of town
Lit by street lamps shining a brilliant orange all around
She saw the demon serpent that has been haunting this place
She stared at its neon eyes without an ounce of fear on her face
The snake came closer, hissed, and coiled in a tight ball
Then it's head rose from its body, raising menacing and tall
It was eye level to the innocent girl that happened upon this land
The same girl that has now inadvertently made a stand
In the serpent's mouth, it's fangs were stained with blood
The girl looked them over, but still there she stood
She was not trembling with fear, nor running in fright
She wouldn't leave until this serpent slithered out into the night
The serpent reared its head back getting ready to strike
But before it lunged it saw something that halted its deadly bite
The young girl was dancing, twirling with the grace of a goddess
Such a beautiful display all wrapped in a pauper's dress
Soon, though, the snake snapped out of its trance
Getting ready to strike the strange girl who broke into dance
It reared back again waiting until the girl's spinning slowed
Then it saw her hair flowing like a river of gold
"I cannot take your life," the snake amazingly sighed
It looked at the ground as a tear came to it's soulless eye
Along with a rare tear it's teeth fell down into the grass
It slithered away as it's fangs slowly turned to ash
"The serpent is gone," all the townsfolk shouted
And unlike before not a single soul pouted
The girl was made a heroine and was highly praised
She left without a word, dancing along the way
Years later the village still remembered the brave young girl
Who saved all their lives with her spinning and twirls
An infinite number of odes to her name the townsfolk sang
About a beauty that could charm a snake into giving up its fangs
Because you may not have gotten it from the literal meaning of the poem: The snake in the poem represents any kind of hardship that the girl may face in life that many people have failed at (i.e. the townsfolk) but a hardship that she will ultimately overcome by doing what she knows and does best (in the poem: dancing). The dancing itself represents a skill or ability the girl does amazingly well, and although it seems normal to her it’s a sight to behold to others. In a way it could easily be about anyone who ever went through any kind of hardship and prevailed even though its about one specific person. Normally, I don't describe the ideas behind my poetry to anyone, I let them figure it out. But I thought it was appropriate since the poem is so fairy tale-ish.
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heartquake
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2007-05-14 03:44:45]
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Re: The Serpent and the Naif
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by pooper on
Wednesday, 28th July 2010 @ 05:48:39 AM AEST
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A very entertaining piece of work., well thought and presented.
I enjoyed your story. |
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