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Life in a Shell
Contributed by
deadheadpoet
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Sunday, 13th May 2007 @ 12:37:31 PM in AEST
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I want to live in a seashell
down on the beach
Hearing the waves
ebb and flow
Sand and water within my reach
In my little house
I'd be so very blessed
Salty air to fragrance me
I don my elegant shell...
a lovely intricate dress
This sandy strip here
my fine, ever changing yard
Seagulls fly overhead
Odd shadows created
Life for me is not so hard
I crawl about with my house in tow
visiting all my friends
Sunshine warms me
Days go by and I'm...
Dreaming it shall never end.
5-2-07
Laura Horner
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Re: Life in a Shell
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by shelby on
Sunday, 13th May 2007 @ 02:47:14 PM AEST
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what a dreamy and pefectly peaceful write sis, I can hear the waves and smell the sea sounds like the place to be.
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Re: Life in a Shell
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by Dom on
Sunday, 13th May 2007 @ 05:36:48 PM AEST
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A lovely, relaxing write. I live on the coast and I'm always thankful for being able to go down to the beach and seeing the sea stretching away to the horizon. One of my favourite places,
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Re: Life in a Shell
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by needledancing on
Monday, 14th May 2007 @ 12:08:47 PM AEST
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| Find a big shell I'd like to come along.That sounds like the perfect place to be. Quiet, serene...fresh air, sunshine...Great piece. |
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Re: Life in a Shell
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by Ramfire on
Tuesday, 15th May 2007 @ 03:07:08 AM AEST
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A very nice thought. To just live on the beach in a shell and enjoy everything around sounds great. Keep those poetic juices flowing.
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Re: Life in a Shell
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by myheartsvoice on
Tuesday, 15th May 2007 @ 04:02:55 AM AEST
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This one get's the one word description from me sister laura. MASTERPEICE . . . 4 the poem and definately 4 the idea.
((((peace2u my hippie sister))))
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Re: Life in a Shell
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by Spike on
Saturday, 2nd June 2007 @ 10:32:12 PM AEST
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yes- it's all about location, location, location! (lol). A very dreamy write - I could feel the warm sun and picture the whole scenario so clearly. Nice one, Laura.
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