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As I Sit
Contributed by
deadheadpoet
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Saturday, 12th May 2007 @ 11:49:52 AM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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The rain it falls down relentlessly
I imagine the sky to be crying
So many tears building up
that when she comes....she pours
Everything around me is such
a vivid shade of green
Soaking what the rains bring
The ground is already full and begins to overflow
Humidity high, vapor in the air
Smoky trails emit from my mouth
My nostrils breathing in the cool air
Moisture absorbed into every pore
Scents of rain and dirt
of the sweetest parfum I know
Splashed with fragrance of green
Surreal this air, this feel, as I sit
5-4-07
Laura Horner
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Re: As I Sit
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by emystar on
Saturday, 12th May 2007 @ 11:58:55 AM AEST
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Beautifull write and photo.
I luv the rain. I can sleep like a baby when it's raining.
Huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: As I Sit
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 12th May 2007 @ 12:02:33 PM AEST
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Laurabeam! ! ! ! Ah, now that's what I needed. Very nice. I have not been able to read or write any poems for quite some time now so this was a great way to start back up again!!!!
Loves ya'
TimBro
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Re: As I Sit
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by shelby on
Saturday, 12th May 2007 @ 01:14:56 PM AEST
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sis,
the pic is beautiful and the poem just as lovely I could hear the rain, feel the dampness, smell the earth.Wish I was sitting there with you drinking a up of joe.
huggers sis
~Michelle~ |
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Re: As I Sit
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by catz77 on
Saturday, 12th May 2007 @ 03:57:29 PM AEST
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beautiful write
i really enjoyed reading it
-catz |
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Re: As I Sit
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by Dom on
Saturday, 12th May 2007 @ 05:31:46 PM AEST
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It was like this for me last night, and I opened my bedroom window and watched the rain for ages. I love the rain, and your poem expresses this joy at nature wonderfully.
Lovely write,
Dom |
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Re: As I Sit
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 13th May 2007 @ 09:58:39 AM AEST
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Sis, this has a wonderful, cleansing feel to it.
I love the rain .. the smell, sight and sound of it!
There is nothing to compare to the gentle melody of
a fresh falling rain. You've done justice to this beauty
and wonder of nature, hun.
Tremendous!!!
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Re: As I Sit
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by myheartsvoice on
Tuesday, 15th May 2007 @ 04:13:32 AM AEST
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Priceless sister laura. your work has that keep one coming back 4 another read quality and the picture is a gem. Simply lovely writting always.
((((peace 2u my sister))))
Ben |
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