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Contributed by christie_1012 on Friday, 11th May 2007 @ 12:54:20 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems




I am wondering around in the dark with no light
There is no where to turn or no one to call
I just need a friend a shoulder to cry on
I lost all hope and anyone who has cared
And now when it is my turn no where is there
I try to re call the past, I live in it every day
Now I go to cry tears but don’t even come
Life as pasted me by and left me in a hole
I have climbed out time and time again
But this time is the last
I don’t have the strength or courage to try again
It just takes so much, so much more than I have
All I have is my self and that is not much
My heart has a hole that will never be filled
My soul no longer exists
My body cries for help but I don’t answer
Pain is all my body knows
Hurt is all my heart does
Everything is a challenge everyday
The simple task has become impossible
Nothing can be asked of me
Nothing can be expected of me
I am nothing with out you
To hid behind to protect from the truth
Can we please come back to save me
Take me away from this gray area I am
I need you more than I need water
I need I want it more then the world
Please come back and save me




Copyright © christie_1012 ... [ 2007-05-11 12:54:20]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Done (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 11th May 2007 @ 01:47:12 PM AEST
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Very sad but well written.
Hang tuff.
I live alone by choice and I luv it.
Hope you feel better really soon.
I'll say a prayer for you.
Big huggs, luv,
emy


Re: Done (User Rating: 1 )
by dogsruleruby on Sunday, 25th July 2010 @ 10:32:40 AM AEST
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I like it, it's well written.
The only thing I really see wrong is a couple of spelling/typo errors,
Such as in the first line, "I am wondering around in the dark with no light"
I'm pretty sure that should be "wandering".
But, all in all, good job.
Keep writing.




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