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Needledancings letter to Heaven
Contributed by
needledancing
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Thursday, 10th May 2007 @ 11:42:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
MothersDayPoems
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Standing in the hour of time,
I speak my words in quiet rhyme.
Dwelling some on all of life,
A Mother, Sister, Daughter, Wife.
A Mother can be strength behold,
A Sister friend, confidante of gold.
A Daughter light in worldly eyes,
A Wife no measure cuts that size.
As we move to our sacred Day,
I thank all Mothers sent our way.
Without her lessons at whatever cost.
Heavens greatest gift would then be lost.
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needledancing
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2007-05-10 23:42:04]
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Re: Needledancings letter to Heaven
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by deadheadpoet on
Friday, 11th May 2007 @ 01:20:47 AM AEST
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*hugs you tightly* Beautiful write. I lost my mother at 18, I know how very hard it is. I try to think this way though....My younger sister was 6 years old when mom died....at least I had her wisdom and love for 18 years...my sister, wasn't so lucky. I think too of how many people have moms that aren't so great, again I may have not had my mother for long, but at least when I had her.....she was one hell of a woman. (I love and miss her till this day and I'm 42 now) Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece. I think my mother is my angel that follows me all the time.
Peace and hugs,
Laura |
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Re: Needledancings letter to Heaven
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 11th May 2007 @ 07:52:27 AM AEST
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Wow oh wow what a poetic tribute my friend! An amazing job, so full of tryth and love. A powerful final line. I am sure this letter was more than well received in heaven and feel she will be looking down with deep love as she reads each line.
BRAVO!
SCM |
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Re: Needledancings letter to Heaven
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by myheartsvoice on
Friday, 11th May 2007 @ 11:32:14 AM AEST
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So true for the hand that rocks the cradle is the heart that ruels the world. another beautiful sentiment to some one most deserving of it. Very lovely ND . . .
Ben |
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Re: Needledancings letter to Heaven
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by emystar on
Friday, 11th May 2007 @ 03:19:08 PM AEST
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Beautifull tribute to your mom.
Good work and happy mothers day to you.
My mom passed in 1979.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Needledancings letter to Heaven
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by Crow on
Saturday, 12th May 2007 @ 09:48:19 PM AEST
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hon what a deserving write to your Mother"
all should be held in the highest honor ..Vincent |
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Re: Needledancings letter to Heaven
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Saturday, 12th May 2007 @ 11:43:17 PM AEST
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| You write a tribute filled with flowing love, thanks for sharing such a wonderful prose, Hugs Valerie |
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Re: Needledancings letter to Heaven
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by Butterat_Zool on
Wednesday, 27th June 2007 @ 06:32:10 AM AEST
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A warm, personal tribute.
BZ. |
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