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Do This
Contributed by
daniel
on
Thursday, 27th February 2003 @ 06:40:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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yes i went off again and there i scared you
it was just belligerance and yes i dared to
come to a point where my end could be real
it scared me most of all, so now how do you feel?
an ongoing cycle that seems so unending
i cannot stifle feelings and keep on pretending
that deadpan facade is safeguarding my aim
what happens next looks planned out the same
i want it to be right
i want to see tonight
so let me do this...
i want it to be alright
i want to see this night
so come and do this...
do this... do this... do this... do this...
no i don't want to sit this round and be passive
the scenery is all the same so what is different?
collected cautious careful steps right up until
i realize i cared enough to forget i am a pill
so the tripping to the ripping to the dipping of my flesh is done
blindsided, knocked out, fallen in a marsh and here is another one
no i don't want to circumvent this circumstance
what's next is for me to do this while i can chance
do this... do this... do this... do this...
so let me, so come and
forget me, well do that do that...
so the tripping to the ripping to the dipping of my flesh is done
so the chipping and the dripping and the sipping of my cup is won
so let me, so come and
forget me, well do that do that... and do this
do this... do this... do this... do this...
Copyright ©
daniel
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2003-02-27 06:40:00]
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Re: Do This
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Thursday, 27th February 2003 @ 09:49:07 AM AEST
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Very good write!
"i realize i cared enough to forget i am a pill " :)
"so the tripping to the ripping to the dipping of my flesh is done
so the chipping and the dripping and the sipping of my cup is won" :) |
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Re: Do This
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by tease_whizz on
Thursday, 27th February 2003 @ 12:20:52 PM AEST
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| powerful write - i love the form and style, the words would be great song lyrics. great poem - keep them coming. Kate x |
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Re: Do This
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by DreamWeaver on
Friday, 28th February 2003 @ 07:21:00 PM AEST
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| Wow this is great Daniel. I loved this. I only wish we could hear it as well. Great write... Jan |
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