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Believe
Contributed by
deadheadpoet
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Wednesday, 9th May 2007 @ 05:04:59 PM in AEST
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I want to believe
to trust to move on
Believe in things again
A colored sunset
A fresh new dawn
People can be honest
People can be cruel
I want to believe in this
and I want to believe in you
Days can be sweet again
for we create what they are
Summer nights
Tender moments
wishes on innumerable stars
together we take flight
on wings of hope and renewal
Destination unknown
A search for mystic jewels
We shall go the journey
I could only of shared it with you
We'll figure this all out
Connect the pieces
Answer questions, eliminate any doubt
Whatever happens to us
This will never change
We will be lovers eternal
Scaling this mountain range
5-7-07
Laura Horner
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Re: Believe
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by sadaddy on
Wednesday, 9th May 2007 @ 06:22:19 PM AEST
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this is a very nice write, thank you for sharing it with us
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Re: Believe
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by Spike on
Wednesday, 9th May 2007 @ 10:02:14 PM AEST
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Hope springs eternal, Laura, if the beliefs are as realistic and insightful as portrayed here. Must have been some moment, leading to this.
S.
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Re: Believe
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by Crow on
Wednesday, 9th May 2007 @ 10:35:17 PM AEST
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"Days can be sweet again
for we create what they are"
every good thought I have, sent on it`s way to you my friend. excellent write. Vincent
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Re: Believe
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by needledancing on
Wednesday, 9th May 2007 @ 10:52:06 PM AEST
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| Absolutely, perfectly,lovingly written. Love this piece Laura |
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Re: Believe
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by myheartsvoice on
Thursday, 10th May 2007 @ 12:19:08 AM AEST
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To often we wanna beleive in things that we know are based on mere illusions and so we ignore them, like the old Barbra Strisand recording of the Way We Were. That says
" What's to painful to remember, we simple choose to forget . . . only to have it come back another time at a most inconvinant moment causing one to realize the best way not to be dissilusioned in the first place is to never to beleive in half thruths. as always your poetry conveys a very masterful comand of the art of true craftsmenship fused with artistic genius. All the best 2u my hippie sister.
((((Peace2u always)))) |
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Re: Believe
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Thursday, 10th May 2007 @ 12:21:13 AM AEST
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Re: Believe (User Rating: 1)
by myheartsvoice on Thursday, May 10 2007 @ 00:19:08 AEST
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To often we wanna beleive in things that we know are based on mere illusions and so we ignore them, like the old Barbra Strisand recording of the Way We Were. That says
" What's to painful to remember, we simple choose to forget . . . only to have it come back another time at a most inconvinant moment causing one to realize the best way not to be dissilusioned in the first place is to never to beleive in half thruths. as always your poetry conveys a very masterful comand of the art of true craftsmenship fused with artistic genius. All the best 2u my hippie sister.
((((Peace2u always))))
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Re: Believe
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 10th May 2007 @ 03:09:59 AM AEST
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Beautifully penned piece of resolved and defined hopefulness obviously written with a depth of love I would expect from you. Tip o' the hat, Laura.
wabl
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Re: Believe
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by shelby on
Thursday, 10th May 2007 @ 03:13:39 AM AEST
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Sis,
first of all it was so nice to hear your voice and talk to you , it seemed we have known eachother our entire life....
I do believe that the inner flame in your soul will guide you along and there will be more of those star lit skies and midnight walks together the two of you.
May the mountain ranges open to you and the climb be a small one to reach the top.I love ya sis....
Peace, comfort, blessings and hugs to you and the family
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Re: Believe
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by PhantomVampyress on
Thursday, 10th May 2007 @ 11:32:50 AM AEST
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wow! a very hopeful inspiring piece of work here laurabean.. its so eloquently written. I love the last paragraph the most its so hopeful.
beauitful job
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