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His Eyes Shine
Contributed by
NoSaint
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Wednesday, 9th May 2007 @ 09:33:50 AM in AEST
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His eyes shine
Bright once more
For he met her
On the other shore
Light is their spirits
Full are their hearts
They know now
They will not again part
Walking Heavens shores
Hand in hand they roam
No pain or illness, only joy
They are forever home
How wonderful the sight
Of these lovers together again
For being with each other
Was always their true Heaven
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Re: His Eyes Shine
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by deadheadpoet on
Wednesday, 9th May 2007 @ 12:31:50 PM AEST
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Oh Shari, this was a very touching write. I started thinking of the many elderly couples I've taken care of in nursing, before I read the poem. Yes, it seems to be that way, their ultimate joy is again being together. I have seen more than a few couples...once one dies...the other shortly follows. As a geriatric nurse, we would almost expect one to pass then the other.
Peace and hugs,
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Re: His Eyes Shine
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by FRANCO on
Wednesday, 9th May 2007 @ 02:39:16 PM AEST
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This a wonderful tribute to all those old couple who live their lives for one another.
Great Poem
FRANCO. |
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Re: His Eyes Shine
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by bluestars on
Wednesday, 9th May 2007 @ 03:32:34 PM AEST
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That is wonderful that you wrote a poem for a couple like them. Keep on writing
Best Wishes |
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Re: His Eyes Shine
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 9th May 2007 @ 04:47:30 PM AEST
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A wonderful tribute for the great couple..
Much of love my dear friend. :-) venkat |
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Re: His Eyes Shine
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by Crow on
Wednesday, 9th May 2007 @ 10:20:11 PM AEST
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Hon you told me the story of the Two" there is a fitting sadness, but that wonderful thought of them together once more...for me.. Peace is the stronger feeling this lends.
Bless you my friend.. Vincent |
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Re: His Eyes Shine
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by shelby on
Thursday, 10th May 2007 @ 03:17:58 AM AEST
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This made me cry. It is sad in the fact they have both now departed our eathly plain but I am overjoyed they are together once more.
The way you wrote this shined a light on the beauty of death and mourning because two hearts will forever be together in eternity
Michelle |
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