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Existance Within A Blink
Contributed by
fallensilence
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Thursday, 27th February 2003 @ 06:20:00 AM in AEST
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When I wake I hear a sound outside my window
It reminds me of birds chirping in the fall
But when I look the sound seems so distant
Like it was never there at all.
(blink)
and then his eyes are open (again)
trying to remember how long he's been awake.
the clock next to his bed must be broken
theres a momentary relapse as his thoughts gather
"it must have been a long night" he thinks
he dismisses it and sets out for the mornings runaround...
(blink)
I'm in the car and I realize I don't know where I am.
This can't be healthy (what can't be healthy?)
I'm not sure.
There's that familiar feeling of being pushed back,
a sort of struggle, but I'm not sure what it is
that I am fighting.
(blink)
he's finally here. his head hurts.
"must have zoned out" he says trying to explain
why he has no memory of being (remember) in the car. He steps outside...again. but its only his first time out.
the sun is hot. and it burns.
(blink)
"Work!"
It hits me like a ton of bricks
But that is not where I am no matter
How much I would like it to be.
This place feels familiar but I cannot remember
(but somewhere inside he really does).
It must be nothing.
(blink)
his face forms a sinister grin, like it has all the other times,
and his reign of terror begins....
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2003-02-27 06:20:00]
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Re: Existance Within A Blink
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by tease_whizz on
Thursday, 27th February 2003 @ 12:24:34 PM AEST
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| wow, loved this - you really get across the sense of those momentary lapses of consciousness. great write - keep them coming, Kate x |
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Re: Existance Within A Blink
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by LovingWhispers on
Saturday, 1st March 2003 @ 01:14:49 AM AEST
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| Yeah I love this...Please post more!! I can see this merging into a great horror story....Excellent! |
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Re: Existance Within A Blink
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by bobotheclown on
Monday, 3rd March 2003 @ 08:06:58 PM AEST
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wow... dont know what to say except to echo what the others said.
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