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One Night Stand
Contributed by
FRANCO
on
Tuesday, 8th May 2007 @ 10:17:48 PM in AEST
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It was a stunning dreamy dusk;
birds afar flew back
at brisk, I gently gazed
at her – she though lay fervently
waited for me, rapped in her
gauzy purple gown, longingly rolled
towards, offering her smooth body to me.
A strange hunger erupted within
I gently took her in my arms with
a smile on my face, I whispered “it‘s a
long time O love, I had some one so
beautiful like you in my arm”.
My manly arms peeled her thin translucent
gown fondly feeling her balled smooth tender skin,
“you my love, gonna add-in tasty juicy to
my yearning night” sang my heart.
Ho…Wriggle not your jealousy face O, my sweet love; she is none
but “a balled onion” that I chopped to add taste to my late night dinner.
-FRANCO.-
Copyright ©
FRANCO
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Re: One Night Stand
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by Sena on
Tuesday, 8th May 2007 @ 11:52:58 PM AEST
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LMAO....Franco..you never cease to amaze!
Peace,
Sena |
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Re: One Night Stand
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 9th May 2007 @ 01:02:35 AM AEST
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omigosh Franco! lol
You got me .. you truly did! Good gracious that was quite
a metaphor! *phew*
Hope your dinner was "tasty"! lol
Great job!
~Breezy |
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Re: One Night Stand
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 9th May 2007 @ 04:26:12 AM AEST
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ROFLMAO!!!!! man you had me going with this one.Loved it.
Michelle |
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Re: One Night Stand
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by RICHARD_CAMPBELL on
Wednesday, 9th May 2007 @ 04:35:40 AM AEST
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wow! who say love is dead,
this is nice and sweet,bro u rock.don't be puting though in my head.very nicely done. |
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Re: One Night Stand
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by needledancing on
Wednesday, 9th May 2007 @ 11:25:02 PM AEST
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You devil poet you...teasing us like that.
So Franco is a jokster aye????Well done my friend. |
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Re: One Night Stand
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 11th May 2007 @ 07:27:47 AM AEST
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FRANCO, my friend wow of all the vegetables. WOW! This had me as well. I enjoy onions, but boy to you enjoy onions I mean really enjoy them!
A wonderful metaphor and it makes me a little hungry. Now I must go eat. Thanks for that.
BRAVO a hell of a job!
- SCM |
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Re: One Night Stand
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 24th May 2007 @ 05:09:11 AM AEST
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i have to admit you had me too! i was taken in by the passion and blasted by laughter when i realized! lol!
love n' hugs nessa |
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