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once upon a time
Contributed by
Shattered_soul
on
Tuesday, 8th May 2007 @ 06:03:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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once upon a time
I had fallen for a girl.
I fell fast
And I fell hard
For this girl
Id give
My world.
But then things changed
And my falling
turned to hurting
I cried for this girl
And I tried for this girl
But its apparent
That it wasn’t meant to be.
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Shattered_soul
... [
2007-05-08 18:03:43]
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Re: once upon a time
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 9th May 2007 @ 04:29:46 AM AEST
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Flowing lovely write touched with the sad undertones of losing love, nicely done.
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Re: once upon a time
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by RICHARD_CAMPBELL on
Wednesday, 9th May 2007 @ 04:43:27 AM AEST
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| we all go true this i guess to grow,i know what you mean,it will hurt for awhile but at lease you made it.and you realize it was not ment to be.very nicely put. |
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Re: once upon a time
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by CrimsonTears on
Wednesday, 9th May 2007 @ 01:54:10 PM AEST
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i know this feeling all too well...great write...awesome job
Lots of Love
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Re: once upon a time
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by PhantomVampyress on
Thursday, 10th May 2007 @ 11:47:36 AM AEST
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this is a very sad write. it has a nice flow to it.. very well expressed
vampyress jenni |
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