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Soldier's Tale I
Contributed by
TheSpiritx
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Tuesday, 8th May 2007 @ 01:01:18 PM in AEST
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I watched from the corner,
Forced down by metal insects,
As my friend fell in the dust,
Blood pouring from his arm and chest.
He struggled, squirmed on the ground
And held out his arm, bent at an angle.
He pleaded for help or a medic or his mommy
And quietly spoke with an angel.
We dedicate this soldier’s cross
To those who’ve died out here.
You all inspire me and everyone
To continue fighting without fear.
Copyright ©
TheSpiritx
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2007-05-08 13:01:18]
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Re: Soldier's Tale I
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 8th May 2007 @ 03:10:55 PM AEST
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I'm very humbled at this write. It's heart wrenching but awesome writing.
I can't imagene seeing this almost daily and never knowing who will be next.
I do so have the deepest revernce to all soilders. Also I appreciate you sharing with us. We need to know 'bout these things even tho it hurts to hear.God bles you and yours and all our militarry.
Peace, joy, luv, thanks, prayers,
emy |
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Re: Soldier's Tale I
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 9th May 2007 @ 04:45:34 AM AEST
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While reading I had tears come to my eyes.
I wish for you safety in your journeys.
This poem is beautiful.
~Michelle~ |
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