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Silence
Contributed by
crow
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Tuesday, 8th May 2007 @ 11:22:06 AM in AEST
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Lifepoems
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I`m here to avenge nothing
the task was well preformed.
Im here the moment, gone forever
the better choice, no tear.
I stand in silence,
amoung the rubble
they don`t know me never will.
Some tasks a bounty
some tasks were pain
this memory will fade.
Forever after,
hollow thought
a giver and taker in life.
What you see
is your own creation
and scares you.
what I am has wept, and forgiven...Vincent
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crow
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2007-05-08 11:22:06]
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Re: Silence
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by Honey56 on
Tuesday, 8th May 2007 @ 12:01:00 PM AEST
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A very nice write..
C.S |
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Re: Silence
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by brew on
Tuesday, 8th May 2007 @ 12:18:25 PM AEST
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So the tongue silences what ever was put in front......well maybe for the best
We all cant have silence and no........well Ok I wont judge ..I dont know. I do know when someone speaks they should know.its MEANT.......so dont hurt hearts
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Re: Silence
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 8th May 2007 @ 03:24:36 PM AEST
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wow, Vincent, this is incredible. I am always so
astounded how you can say something so powerful
with so few words. The last line is very potent!
Exceptional, my friend.
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Re: Silence
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 8th May 2007 @ 04:16:18 PM AEST
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Awesome work friend.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Silence
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by Bruce on
Tuesday, 8th May 2007 @ 04:56:18 PM AEST
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| Excellent write |
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Re: Silence
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 9th May 2007 @ 04:47:17 AM AEST
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This holds alot of meaning my friend as all of them do.
hugs
~Michelle~ |
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