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One Day
Contributed by
satanssecret1369
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Monday, 7th May 2007 @ 02:40:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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You walked into my life one day
I’ve never been the same
“I’m invisible”
“You’re irresistible”
Inside my head
The things you said
“Life is a one-way road
Taking you places you don’t want to go.
You can never turn back.”
The words of my past
One day you were gone
I never could move on
Nights I spent lonely in my room
Thinking and dreaming; my thoughts all of you
You never did write me
You never did call
I saw what you couldn’t see
I never once let you fall
The times got to changing
My heart rearranging
Broken scenes from the past
Love that never could last
Moving on to the future
I never was sure…
You walked into my life one day
I’ve never been the same
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2007-05-07 14:40:35] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: One Day
(User Rating: 1 ) by jackson21 on
Tuesday, 8th May 2007 @ 12:05:48 PM AEST (User
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I thought that was cool! Very well written, fav. bit was "I saw what you couldn’t see
I never once let you fall" mainly because others don't always see or wish to see the pedistall peope put them on! Oh and this bit too "Broken scenes from the past
Love that never could last
Moving on to the future
I never was sure…" How so many people struggle just from the thought of this! Well descibed, makes me think of the If Only's!
Great work keep it up! - Jack. |
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