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Contributed by
ihop
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Monday, 7th May 2007 @ 11:40:57 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I cry my nights away
You cant see
I leave no clues
You wouldn't guess that of me
I'm hurting, you cant tell
That I'm not feeling well
I'm hiding from life
My life is like hell
Hidden
Behind the shadows
Three steps below those
who used to look up to me
No time to think about
What I used be
Hidden
Behind the popular
The cool kids
Thats what I cant be
I don't want to be me
Don't ask questions about my
Littles white lies
That soon became blacker
than a panthers eyes
Watching me,
Criticizing me,
Encouraging me to be
what I want to be
But now I cry more than a floor just mopped
Time to stop
No more pain in my veins
I'm going insane, I've changed my range
and I'm to blame
No more fame in this game
I've gotten rid of the pain
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ihop
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2007-05-07 11:40:57]
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Re: Hidden
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by myheartsvoice on
Monday, 7th May 2007 @ 12:54:05 PM AEST
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A good honest write revealing the inner self to all. Nice flow to. As for the cool kids well, you don't need to be cool but if you must, there's nothing cooler than just being you.
We all start out like sombody, but eventually we must be ourselves you know develope your own brand of you. Nobody can be you except you, You can either be great at being you, or lousy at being someone else, the choice is yours. take care
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Re: Hidden
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by Bruce on
Monday, 7th May 2007 @ 08:54:22 PM AEST
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| I agree TOTALLY with ben. Good luck |
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