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Re: ONLY SIXTEEN
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by Bruce on
Saturday, 5th May 2007 @ 04:23:06 PM AEST
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| So Beautiful, mere words could never express, what you have written here. |
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Re: ONLY SIXTEEN
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by jenniferstein2007 on
Saturday, 5th May 2007 @ 07:25:22 PM AEST
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| this was really good i think you could turn it into a song |
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Re: ONLY SIXTEEN
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 5th May 2007 @ 11:03:40 PM AEST
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Emy, my friend, you always write with such beauty and heart.
I am thankful for the safety of your grandaughter, and
for you as well. You inspire us all, hun. Your words are like a
beautiful warm hug. Thank you for sharing. Always~
~Breezy |
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Re: ONLY SIXTEEN
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by jerseysue on
Sunday, 6th May 2007 @ 04:22:50 AM AEST
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| This is beautiful, someone was really looking out for her that day. Lovely poem. Sue x |
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Re: ONLY SIXTEEN
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 6th May 2007 @ 06:44:42 AM AEST
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But Jesus blood's never tardy.
Is that not truth and gloriously presented I don't know what is. Wow a great spiritual write and glorious tribute to your grand daughter! Quite a wonderful job. I am glad to see something new from you. Touching and powerful emy!
BRAVO!
SCM |
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Re: ONLY SIXTEEN
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by Lele on
Sunday, 6th May 2007 @ 11:37:33 AM AEST
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This is a beautifull poem, remind me a good brasilian poem "O Cântico do Calvário" de Fagundes Varella who wrote for his dead son. Fortunately, your grand daughter had a happy end. I was happy for her and for you.
Hugs.
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Re: ONLY SIXTEEN
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by deadheadpoet on
Sunday, 6th May 2007 @ 12:36:11 PM AEST
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Beautiful. The last line was so powerful.
Peace and hugs,
Laura |
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Re: ONLY SIXTEEN
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by Crow on
Monday, 7th May 2007 @ 04:51:00 AM AEST
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| Emy, things happen so fast, bless you and yours, keep that wonderful faith. great write my friend. Vincent |
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Re: ONLY SIXTEEN
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by myheartsvoice on
Monday, 7th May 2007 @ 01:32:57 PM AEST
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Beautiful write emy as always. glad all turned out for the best my friend. take care. love that name also.
((((emystar))))
Ben |
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Re: ONLY SIXTEEN
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by sadaddy on
Tuesday, 8th May 2007 @ 03:17:05 PM AEST
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This truly a beautiful write and blessing that you have written and received. May your grand daughter’s recovery go by quickly. Peace and joy truly fills your heart Emystar.
sadaddy |
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Re: ONLY SIXTEEN
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 24th May 2007 @ 05:27:52 PM AEST
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omg emy! im so glad she is alright! my son tried teaching my daughter to drive last week and they wrecked too, also safe, but scared the crap out of me! i dont know what we would do without any of them, hopefully we will never know!
big love n' huggies nessa xxx |
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Re: ONLY SIXTEEN
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by veenu on
Wednesday, 13th February 2008 @ 09:45:56 PM AEST
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u r really a great writer..............god bless u
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