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A Swan
Contributed by
deadheadpoet
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Saturday, 5th May 2007 @ 05:04:20 AM in AEST
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A swan glides through the water
streamline through the reeds
Pristine lake, purple mountains
adds to the mystique
High above sea level
close to touching clouds,
trees of pine scent air
they blow and wave about
Tranquility is the scene
as the swan flows along
Trumpeting to his lover
his lonely, mournful song
5-2-07
Laura Horner
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Re: A Swan
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by Honey56 on
Saturday, 5th May 2007 @ 05:12:14 AM AEST
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This is simply wonderful!!
Nice poem...God Bless!
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Re: A Swan
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 5th May 2007 @ 05:37:15 AM AEST
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Wow! Laura, such a majestic write for one of the most majestic of birds. A wonderful, beautiful tribute! Your wording was perfect. Very discriptive and lacing the reader into a glorious place! Well, well, well done! Brilliant and gorgeous!
BRAVO
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Re: A Swan
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by Dom on
Saturday, 5th May 2007 @ 05:44:41 AM AEST
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You have painted some beautiful images in my mind.
This was indeed a very peaceful poem, one of the reasons I love nature writes so much.
Thank you for the read,
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Re: A Swan
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by Crow on
Saturday, 5th May 2007 @ 01:40:49 PM AEST
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| Laura, isn`t this a beautiful write, nature seems to bring peace to us all. Vincent |
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Re: A Swan
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by emystar on
Saturday, 5th May 2007 @ 02:48:54 PM AEST
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girlfriend, You are on a role.
Awesome.
Big huggs, smiles,
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Re: A Swan
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by shelby on
Sunday, 6th May 2007 @ 01:36:36 AM AEST
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the beauty in this brought tears to my eyes. You are the swan sis, think of that and keep that near your heart, float gracefully through the pain and the troubles, you will come out on the otherside of the lake a free woman.
hugsss
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