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The Universe
Contributed by
Lele
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Saturday, 5th May 2007 @ 03:40:37 AM in AEST
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O Universo (Original)
A noite se mostra;
A eternidade vem, chega
na imagem que se olha.
The Universe
Night shows to herself,
Eternity so comes
In the image that's stared.
Copyright ©
Lele
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2007-05-05 03:40:37] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: The Universe
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Saturday, 5th May 2007 @ 04:56:02 AM AEST (User
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I am not a Hai-ku fan. I have written some myself and there are some which are wonderful. This is one of those which is powerful. Completely expressive in so little words. For a hai-ku this is as good as they come! Wonderful Job!
BRAVO!
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