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Asexual
Contributed by
sena
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Friday, 4th May 2007 @ 03:50:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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I'm cellibate again.
Unable to please myself.
Is this normal?
I know I once felt...
Swollen lips, blushed cheeks,
Lustful kisses, lingering sighs,
Goosebumps growing, tickling,
Caressed skin, trembling thighs.
Whispers of my name,
Making me succomb...
The interlocking of two,
Elegantly becomming one.
It's such beautiful agony,
To think about wanting,
Wanting to feel again...
But can't for he's still haunting.
Haunting my deepest thoughts,
My most personal dreams...
So I continue to do without,
Even when hormones scream.
It's not for lack of trying,
Or the lack of need.
It's just that the flower can't grow,
In earth embellished in weeds.
He planted them there,
With his ugly words and looks of hate.
Even though I've cut them down,
They just grow back-blocking the gate.
The gate to inner peace...
Just simple self pleasure...
Something once so easy...
Now too difficult to measure.
I guess I'll keep on trying...
Try until I get it right.
For once I succeed,
I'll sleep better at night.
Copyright ©
sena
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2007-05-04 15:50:41]
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Re: Asexual
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by FRANCO on
Friday, 4th May 2007 @ 07:42:28 PM AEST
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well written poem indeed.
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Re: Asexual
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by Dom on
Friday, 4th May 2007 @ 08:58:48 PM AEST
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Stunning poem, you capture the yearning and isolation perfectly.
I like the identification with the 'gate to inner peace' and how you have metaphorically presented the struggle to get there.
Great write, I am glad I stopped by your page,
Take care,
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Re: Asexual
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by Rhei76 on
Friday, 4th May 2007 @ 10:27:47 PM AEST
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Excellent write.
as they say time heals all wounds
just keep trying, you'll get there |
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