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Every Heart
Contributed by
crow
on
Friday, 4th May 2007 @ 02:18:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Heart I live here
I have regret
that list of fools
remember I have been one.
We all have proof
look in my eyes
can you see?
I have traced back
through the wanting, and love,
that aching you bring with sorrow.
Heart I have repeated myself
to get it right,
I lay callous and torn
boiled with yesterdays
numbed I can not cry.
Heart I live here
look in my eyes
can you see?
the hope just behind them....Vincent
Copyright ©
crow
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2007-05-04 14:18:36]
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Re: Every Heart
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by Vampirequeen on
Friday, 4th May 2007 @ 03:01:25 PM AEST
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life is just a big headache.
good write |
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Re: Every Heart
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by DrowningHeart on
Friday, 4th May 2007 @ 11:10:49 PM AEST
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I can only hope and wonder. This piece for me is so full of emotion, it has just touched my heart. I can feel every single word. Simply marvelous.
Drowningheart |
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Re: Every Heart
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by needledancing on
Friday, 4th May 2007 @ 11:13:09 PM AEST
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| Well put.Hope shall spring eternal...in all hearts who have the ability to love.Pain past is just growing pains as our heart gets bigger. |
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Re: Every Heart
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by shelby on
Saturday, 5th May 2007 @ 12:08:49 AM AEST
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I love this, it says so much
Michelle |
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Re: Every Heart
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by deadheadpoet on
Saturday, 5th May 2007 @ 05:06:34 AM AEST
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Beautifully penned, my friend. I loved your last line.
Peace and hugs,
Laura |
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Re: Every Heart
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 5th May 2007 @ 05:18:48 AM AEST
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A fabulous write Crow. Quite relative and very deep. I especially love the flow. Next to the last stanza is extremely powerful and is a proper introduction to a fascinating conclusion. Well put together poet! I enjoy your work immensely! Keep it up master journey bird!
BRAVO!
SCM |
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Re: Every Heart
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 5th May 2007 @ 12:13:10 PM AEST
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Vincent, wow. The second to last stanza is brilliant, my friend.
What a cornucopia of emotion! Every heart. That conception is
just amazing in and of itself. But wow, what you have done with
the idea is exceptional. A very provocative write.
I am inspired.
~Breezy |
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Re: Every Heart
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by brew on
Saturday, 5th May 2007 @ 12:43:54 PM AEST
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What feel ....what words.what hope.../Yes, very peaceful and beautiful.......all the heart used for the words that flowed......You Vincent are a writer who loves.....looks......and flows.....Just simple.
Loved it
Your friend
Brew~ |
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Re: Every Heart
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 23rd May 2007 @ 12:02:42 PM AEST
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a heart to heart with ones heart, i love this:)
love n' hugs nessa
roses |
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