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Forever And A Day!!!!

Contributed by jackson21 on Friday, 4th May 2007 @ 02:09:14 PM in AEST
Topic: Grief

Hold my breath in the essence of the moment
shivering as the sunlight fades away
close the gap as i try to reslove this
count my blessings cause this time you might stay.
time goes by as if a fleeting moment
clasp with both my hands afraid that it will stray
beakon me with a whiper under your breath again
as you whisper i just turn and run away.
Can't break these walls down any longer
can't hide my smile behind my eyes no more
can't bare to be this far away from you
yet it seems that your better off this way.
As I sit the rain beats down my window
glad the noise will cover up my crys of pain
wash away all the anger and depression
until the day when I break my face again.
Trample all over me please I beg of you
crush me once more but this time break me with your fists
just dare to show some tiny shred of emotion
dig in and trace your fingers along my scars once more.
Please I ask this little pittiful favour of you
my love please just give me something
something to ride along with my grain of hope
that one day you will return and make me shine.
I long just to be held by you once more
constant stabbing pains devour my mind, body, soul, heart
can't you see that my heart is and always will be yours for the taking
forever and day is what i always meant!!!!!

Copyright © jackson21 ... [ 2007-05-04 14:09:14]
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Re: Forever And A Day!!!! (User Rating: 1 )
by needledancing on Friday, 4th May 2007 @ 11:18:04 PM AEST
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To love so deeply is a great thing. Your write speaks well of love even after we have lost. A great capture.

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