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Nature Alone
Contributed by
scrivonel
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Friday, 4th May 2007 @ 10:33:36 AM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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Can the sea so pensive and alive at night
Ever drown itself and see true delight
Can the moon so high burning bright
Ever look within itself and vanish from sight
Can the stars that shine with a desperate plea
Ever shed a tear that everyone can see
Can the whispering motions of a wind alive
Ever grow tired and hope to die
Can the sand of countless grains it seems
Ever count itself and surrender and flee
Can this night without a sun to hide
Ever stop to breathe and cease to dream
Can this nature with all its beauties in sight
Ever fade away and leave me to cry.
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scrivonel
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2007-05-04 10:33:36]
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Re: Nature Alone
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by Dom on
Saturday, 5th May 2007 @ 06:13:51 AM AEST
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I really liked this poem, slow and ponderous it made me consider your words carefully.
You pose some interesting thoughts/questions that we might well all have considered when thinking about the immensity and majesty of nature.
Nice write, take care,
Dom |
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Re: Nature Alone
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by zenith66 on
Friday, 18th May 2007 @ 12:39:24 PM AEST
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Wonderfull, i considered your words with admiraiton, i love your question in nature, i too feel connected to all elements of the universe at times...well done
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Re: Nature Alone
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by needledancing on
Friday, 18th May 2007 @ 03:09:01 PM AEST
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| Wonderfully done my friend...and ponder yes I will for these are questions one should absolutely be asking. |
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