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Heather Fair
Contributed by
arden
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Friday, 4th May 2007 @ 04:18:02 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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copyright Arden2007
Lay gently a kiss upon my up turned eyes
And speak to me of amber
That holds a hint of sadness, in her cries
One by one the keepers fading.
As Heather fair passes by
Mocking a dream that’s worth saving
Evermore she then I
Tapestries adorned in sunlight gold
In silks and satins there she lay
Listening to tears from young and old
As Heather fair finds her way…
Copyright ©
arden
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2007-05-04 04:18:02]
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Re: Heather Fair
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by Dom on
Friday, 4th May 2007 @ 05:39:58 AM AEST
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Beautiful, I got really caught up in your words, you have woven some stunning images.
Beautifully sad, I enjoyed reading,
Dom |
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Re: Heather Fair
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by PhantomVampyress on
Friday, 4th May 2007 @ 05:50:33 AM AEST
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this is a beautiful write.. its very eloquently written. very old fashioned like.. i enjoyed this
vampyress jenni |
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Re: Heather Fair
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by Honey56 on
Friday, 4th May 2007 @ 12:35:11 PM AEST
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This is brautiful..
Blessings |
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Re: Heather Fair
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by Vampirequeen on
Friday, 4th May 2007 @ 03:04:28 PM AEST
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Wow Becky that is so beautiful.
I am always amaze just how good you are in writing.I say you can teach me a thing or two about writing. :) |
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Re: Heather Fair
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 22nd May 2007 @ 06:35:20 AM AEST
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OH MY!!!
I am so pleased I ran across this!
I have always been wowed by your writing.
Amazing! |
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Re: Heather Fair
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by Rylo on
Wednesday, 29th August 2007 @ 06:04:41 AM AEST
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| Absolutely beautiful and done to perfection. I truly do admire your talent. |
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Re: Heather Fair
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 31st March 2010 @ 05:11:33 AM AEST
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| Oh..friend..this is still looks very fresh. Photo also very beautiful..:-) venkat |
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Re: Heather Fair
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by Loende on
Wednesday, 7th April 2010 @ 03:09:34 PM AEST
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Goodness gracious! I am so glad that I
discovered this! What an AMAZING write
that reminds me of days and times gone by.
It is pure magic
Be well,
Loende |
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Re: Heather Fair
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 1st May 2010 @ 01:42:45 PM AEST
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truly beautiful,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Heather Fair
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 15th May 2010 @ 10:50:53 AM AEST
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Even though there is beauty in this there also seems to be a bit of melancholy.
Great writing.
Thanks,
Tim
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Re: Heather Fair
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by hauntedscorp on
Wednesday, 20th May 2015 @ 08:28:47 PM AEST
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Just how I remember your writes being...Emotively strong, with great storytelling and attention to detail. Wonderful to see you back.
Hope you are still writing.
Mocking a dream that's worth saving.
Love it.
~Scorp
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