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the rainbow
Contributed by
Jan_Oskar_Hansen
on
Thursday, 27th February 2003 @ 02:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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The Rainbow
An immense rainbow arched across
the valley its colours bright heralding
happy times and childlike was its smile
From the east, however, a huge black
cloak shrouded the day and in the west
the sun paled into insignificance
Lightening struck and the thunder that
followed paled the iris into a brand
name on a sweat stained t-shirt.
Shocked rain paused before splashing
down turning roads into rivers, fields
into lakes…and the cold night began.
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Jan_Oskar_Hansen
... [
2003-02-27 02:20:00]
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Re: the rainbow
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by LOWMAN613 on
Thursday, 27th February 2003 @ 10:43:38 AM AEST
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| God gave us the gift of the rainbow,after the Storm! So My motto is after every storm their appears a rainbow! Good write! Christina |
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Re: the rainbow
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 07:56:56 PM AEST
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| Not as evocative as the others i've read, but certainly emotive and full of motion. |
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