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Choices
Contributed by
bigj
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Thursday, 3rd May 2007 @ 08:25:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Within this world,
love slowly decays.
Lust has taken over,
while romance is delayed.
Frogetting the reasons,
why you fell in love.
When your passion had escaped,
and your pride had fallen from above.
Grasping the sexual thoughts,
that had fogged your mind.
Created an entirely new person,
leaving the old one behind.
With that decision,
was a great price to pay.
For the corruption had spread,
and your inosence was stripped away.
Twice as hard you must fight,
to relieve you from this pain.
The pain that tortures you at night,
leaving you lost, and only you to blame.
Copyright ©
bigj
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2007-05-03 08:25:55]
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Re: Choices
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by PhantomVampyress on
Thursday, 3rd May 2007 @ 11:02:31 AM AEST
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a very interesting write.. very powerful and emotionally filled great job here
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: Choices
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by Sena on
Thursday, 3rd May 2007 @ 02:51:07 PM AEST
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| very interesting indeed...I think everyone could take something different from this piece...I know I could relate it to situations in a past relationship of mine. Thanks for sharing. |
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