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As the blood drips
Contributed by
stev0
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Thursday, 3rd May 2007 @ 07:49:10 AM in AEST
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"As the blood drips"
As the blood drips i feel a sense of freedom from life, as i see the blood fall i wonder how something so strong came from a small knife, as it hits my leg i feel a tickle of rebirth, while it drips to my toes i realize how much its worth, as it stains the carpet with its dark crimsom look, as it spreads deeper, and it wont stop i get a lil shook, as i fall to the floor without feeling i pray its time to go, i look at my incision and watch the "river's" steady flow, as my eyes begin to close i feel a tear run down my cold cheek, as i feel my soul leaving my body i dont know what i wish to seek, when i make it to the clouds and realize im there i begin to fall, as i feel the burn of hells fire i realize i was never good at all, as i fall for what seems like forever i begin to cry the most tears ive ever known to release, as i get closer all those emotions seem to cease, as i see the devil himself looking into my eyes i begin to shiver, as he asks my reasoning for my choice i cant seem to deliver, as i hear the beeping of machines i begin to open my eyes to the people i loved and cared for, as i look to heaven i realized i didnt need anything more, so from now on in life ill take lil "sips", ill remember what i went through as the blood drips.
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Re: As the blood drips
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by richcol7522 on
Thursday, 3rd May 2007 @ 08:54:21 AM AEST
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Wow! This was a very emotional and heart felt piece. Hopefully you have come to realize life's worth and that there are alot of people that care for you and that life is worth living.
Great job nonetheless. I hope you can overcome your pain and are able to stop once again.
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Re: As the blood drips
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by joe-joe on
Friday, 4th May 2007 @ 04:12:25 AM AEST
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| a remarkable vision, given so you could see what is on the otherside, hope you will draw strength and courage from it...nice write... |
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