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these dark shadows
Contributed by
brittanycollette
on
Wednesday, 2nd May 2007 @ 03:29:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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constancy is what i fear
dwelling all around me here
neverending cycles near
of what i hate the most.
possibility lend your ear
let me tell you this my dear
youve been gone to long its clear
death as my fate is certain.
and knowing this what options left
how should i spend this lastly breath
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Re: these dark shadows
(User Rating: 1 ) by MickeyPigKnuckles on
Thursday, 3rd May 2007 @ 02:39:27 AM AEST (User
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Oh brittanycollette, what a hurtful situation many face through our journeys through life as the parting of love hurts us deeply and takes such a damaging toll. I would hope one would take that last breath hoping to understand that what may have been can never be nor was meant, hope for a better tomorrow may help us see there is always one that is Heaven sent. I want to commend you for deeply touching this reader deeply with your wonderful talent in poetic literature. Thank you so much for giving us a part of your creative personality through this art and especially for giving us all a little of you. May I ask that you will always allow your poetic pens ink to flow so your heartfelt words of poetry may always grow.
Your Dear Friend
Mickey Pig Knuckles
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