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Crazy Jill
Contributed by
boatbum
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Wednesday, 2nd May 2007 @ 07:11:34 AM in AEST
Topic:
limericks
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There once was a girl named Jill
who one night swallowed too many pills
she was rushed to the doctor
who sat there and mocked her
and declared her mentally ill
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boatbum
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2007-05-02 07:11:34]
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Re: Crazy Jill
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by Katie2008 on
Thursday, 3rd May 2007 @ 10:20:29 AM AEST
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| This was a very interesting poem. I loved how you put such a serious subject matter into an almost light-hearted nursery rhyme. |
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Re: Crazy Jill
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by 5MinutePoet on
Thursday, 14th June 2007 @ 10:54:27 AM AEST
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| The second line needs to become singular to work, maybe something along the lines of 'sho over dosed on her pill' Other wise it doesn't really work for me i'm affraid |
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Re: Crazy Jill
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by 5MinutePoet on
Thursday, 14th June 2007 @ 10:58:21 AM AEST
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| That was meant to read 'She "--------" her pills' Fairly obvious but worth pointing out. My bad. Ps i enjoy the morbid humour, or more a statement in a humourous media, touche' |
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Re: Crazy Jill
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by BurnedRose on
Wednesday, 28th November 2007 @ 08:34:49 AM AEST
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| that was funny :) |
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