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bleeding dry
Contributed by
Phantomvampyress
on
Wednesday, 2nd May 2007 @ 04:23:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Enchanting dreams
I'll make you scream
bleed.. bleed dry of all that remains in the light
take a dive into your own suicide .. or
I will take the knife and drive you to it.
vampyress jenni
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2007-05-02 04:23:55]
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Re: bleeding dry
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by BEE on
Wednesday, 2nd May 2007 @ 04:51:02 AM AEST
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Wonderful write very good with expressing the feelings. Take a look at some of mine
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Re: bleeding dry
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 2nd May 2007 @ 04:59:11 AM AEST
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tsk. tsk. jenni, encouraging people to dive off cliffs and kill themselves... oh wait! it was a dream! *sigh of relief*
love n' hugs nessa |
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Re: bleeding dry
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 2nd May 2007 @ 12:27:16 PM AEST
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Wow this was deep girl, small write though packed a huge punch.
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Re: bleeding dry
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by Vampirequeen on
Wednesday, 2nd May 2007 @ 05:57:38 PM AEST
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wow short but very deep.
You really pack a punch here.
you did an awsome job on this write.
hugs |
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Re: bleeding dry
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by myheartsvoice on
Thursday, 3rd May 2007 @ 07:10:42 AM AEST
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Wow! this deffinately tells it like it is but then it's you in your poetically powerful style. a good write in any case. Thanks for sharing Jenn.
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Re: bleeding dry
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by needledancing on
Monday, 14th May 2007 @ 11:38:31 PM AEST
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| Short, powerful write. Enjoyed. |
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Re: bleeding dry
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Wednesday, 16th May 2007 @ 12:05:54 AM AEST
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short yet packing one powerful deep punch.. amazing poem well done and well expressed..
Take care
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Re: bleeding dry
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 21st May 2007 @ 10:20:58 AM AEST
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Oh my .... Jenni, this was kinda scary .. lol
wow. for a short write it was incredibly potent!
Your word choices stab at the heart.
~Breezy |
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Re: bleeding dry
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by wheels on
Tuesday, 1st July 2008 @ 01:36:34 PM AEST
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A powerful and strong poem in such a few words.
--Kevin
the lonely vagabond
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