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To Suffer
Contributed by
Mila
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Tuesday, 1st May 2007 @ 07:42:37 PM in AEST
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I have done what only I’ve seen in movies & thought how bad and sad it seems- when in reality I was looking into my life-I lied, I cheated, I lost my innocence- I am the one who has made his life so painful- I lost it all for what- It is because of me that he suffers & that he lost his love for me- I did this to myself- I made all the wrong choices & gave up inside of me even though I never stopped loving him- Now I shall suffer & think to myself what if - I have to deal with regret & pain- Now he is living his life & he has moved on but the pain he carries will always be inside of him-Is true I can’t stand to see him with another but that is the price I shall pay for this suffer- Importantly I lost his trust & love for which I will never recover.
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Re: To Suffer
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 2nd May 2007 @ 01:39:08 AM AEST
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very well expressed write.. as long as you learned from your mistake. it helps us grow and do better as we go along. good luck with the next guy.. don't lie and cheat your the one who sufferes in the end.. very good expression here
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Re: To Suffer
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by Ihop on
Wednesday, 2nd May 2007 @ 03:14:56 AM AEST
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| Thats a lie. Your poem had way to many topics. It was full of ****. You're making me suffer. |
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Re: To Suffer
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by Rhei76 on
Thursday, 3rd May 2007 @ 08:08:30 AM AEST
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| well written. very reflective, and you know now how to keep from repeating the cycle. good luck on finding loving arms. |
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