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After All
Contributed by
deadheadpoet
on
Tuesday, 1st May 2007 @ 03:56:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Slowly dying a little more each day.
Necrotic tissue
never to breathe life again
with blood and oxygen.
Blackened and horrific,
the scent of a dead soul is
unforgettable.
You...
You once breathed life into this
hardened structure of a woman,
now death and darkness
has crept into the corners...
Tainted by misguided needs and
curiosities
The forest path has grown over
with twisted vines.
One must sharpen one's machete
to ever penetrate these
sacred woods again.
The once smooth passage
now littered with boulders
which seem unfathomable
to get across or...
around.
If I climbed out of the dark
will I see real light or
only the artificial glow which
seems to have been illuminating
my path for years now?
Will I ever know what the
"real" is? Is any of this real.....
after all?
Penned 4-29-07
Laura Horner
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deadheadpoet
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2007-05-01 15:56:19]
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Re: After All
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by FRANCO on
Tuesday, 1st May 2007 @ 04:39:28 PM AEST
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Very well penned. liked the easy flow of words in this poem.
FRANCO.
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Re: After All
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 1st May 2007 @ 04:50:04 PM AEST
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beautiful from the heart poetry that breathes, i love every line! ...and yes, you will:)
love n' hugs nessa
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Re: After All
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by Crow on
Tuesday, 1st May 2007 @ 10:56:46 PM AEST
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If I climbed out of the dark
will I see real light or
only the artificial glow which
seems to have been illuminating
my path for years now?
I read these words and think of things in my past...really a good write my friend...Vincent |
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Re: After All
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 2nd May 2007 @ 01:41:47 AM AEST
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wow this is so sad laurabean but its lovely. its so eloquently written. so powerful and expressed well. another beautiful write from you dear friend
hugs,
JENNITTUDE |
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Re: After All
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 2nd May 2007 @ 12:04:19 PM AEST
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Emotions run to the edge of the world sis, I wish there was something I could do.
Sending you another hug, as soon as I get this house put back in order, hopefully tomorrow, I will be giving you a call that I promise.
huge hugs and more hugs
love ya
Michelle |
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Re: After All
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by myheartsvoice on
Thursday, 3rd May 2007 @ 07:18:49 AM AEST
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A sad write my sister laura indeed love can be cruel my heart goe's out to you, beautiful write as always though, thank you for sharing this. all the best to you.
(((((Peace and gentle healing to you)))))
Ben |
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