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Chains of Life
Contributed by
grode
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Tuesday, 1st May 2007 @ 02:38:58 PM in AEST
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Chains began to tear my sinewy wrists,
As I open my hands to receive life’s precious gifts,
The chains pull hard my grip is lost,
Others receive the bounty I pay the cost,
Night after night I search for redemption,
Battle for closure but find retention,
The world is round while I remain flat
Inches from the pitching machine lacking the bat,
Walking head held high getting pelted with rain,
Body cold and numb I feel no pain,
My spirit and mind have lost all emotion,
Why are some given a stream and others an ocean?
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grode
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2007-05-01 14:38:58]
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Re: Chains of Life
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by PoeticHybrid on
Tuesday, 1st May 2007 @ 04:36:24 PM AEST
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| Wonderfully put. I know I have been there. Very nice write. |
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Re: Chains of Life
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 1st May 2007 @ 05:02:51 PM AEST
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because some are common and some are poets like you:)
love n' hugs nessa
roses |
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Re: Chains of Life
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 2nd May 2007 @ 04:27:40 AM AEST
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this is a very powerful and expressive write. yes everyone has felt this way before and the feelings portrayed are very true. i really liked the flow and the truthfulness in this particular piece.. great job
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: Chains of Life
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by Lele on
Wednesday, 2nd May 2007 @ 08:44:30 AM AEST
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| As Freud says, our desires are inifity, but our capacity to satisfy us is limited (as more you want to cumplish your desire). Good Poem, congratulations. |
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