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Trapped
Contributed by
brownsugar8272
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Tuesday, 1st May 2007 @ 05:32:31 AM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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A fly in a web
stuck in a world of violence
Spare me ole' spider
Copyright ©
brownsugar8272
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2007-05-01 05:32:31] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Trapped
(User Rating: 1 ) by BEE on
Wednesday, 2nd May 2007 @ 03:24:04 AM AEST (User
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Wonderful write very good with expressing the feelings. Take a look at some of mine
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Re: Trapped
(User Rating: 1 ) by Lele on
Wednesday, 2nd May 2007 @ 08:52:19 AM AEST (User
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Concise, truthful. It is really a true hai-kai (ku). Congratulacions |
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