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The Garden Snail
Contributed by
Malcolmsdreamgirl
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Tuesday, 1st May 2007 @ 03:46:50 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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I wonder what it feels like, to be a real slow snail
To ponder round a garden, and leave a slimy trail
To wind up all the gardeners, of whom most you never met
For all the world to hate you, to want to kill you! I would bet...
I wonder what it feels like, to roam around in morning dew
Not knowing all the trouble caused, and all because of you!
To be eating breakfast or a lunchtime meal, enjoying every bite
Then getting ready for a relaxing break, escaping from the light
Leaving devastation, when really you don't know
Just doing things you want to, going where you want to go.
I wonder would a snail change it's ways, if a gardner were to tell
Would a snail begin to please them? instead of putting them thru Hell?
I wonder what it feels like, I wonder if they care?
Cos a snail can't have much feelings, to do the things they dare!
I'm glad I'm not a garden snail, I don't think I would cope
But if I were, I'd be real nice... At least that's what I'd hope!
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Re: The Garden Snail
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by MickeyPigKnuckles on
Tuesday, 1st May 2007 @ 03:40:01 PM AEST
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Malcolmsdreamgirl, What a creative poem you have composed here as I never thought that a snail could be so inspiring. I really like this and I think others will like it as well. Thank you so much for sharing your wonderful creative personality with us all and for giving us a little more of you which at least one could never get enough. You are so wonderful and your talent is always glowing ever so brightly. All I can say and hope is that your poetic pens ink is always flowing so your words of poetry keeps growing.
Your Dear Friend
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Re: The Garden Snail
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 1st May 2007 @ 03:58:59 PM AEST
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how refreshing! you know...if you leave out peanut butter and a few dog kibbles every morning, the smart ones return year after year and you can watch them grow:) {same with slugs}
love n' hugs nessa
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