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DOUBLE DEVIL DELIGHT
Contributed by
MILLER_GENUINE_SWINE
on
Tuesday, 1st May 2007 @ 01:36:38 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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DEVILS CHASE
ON DRAGONS WINGS THE DEVILS SINGS
FOR THE AGONY AND PAIN THAT HE BRINGS
HIS DEATHLY RATH
IS ON YOUR PATH
HUNTING YOU DOWN AND LOOKING FOR DEATH
WANTING YOUR SOUL , TO SUCK OUT YOUR BREATH
FLYING HIGH UP IN THE SKY
SEEING THE FEAR WITHIN YOUR EYE
THIRSTING FOR SOULS
TO MAKE HIM WHOLE
LOOKING FOR YOU TO BID ADO
EATTING YOUR SOUL ALIVE
DEVILS DANCE
ANGELS FLY ON WINGS OF A DOVE
SPREADING THE JOY SPREADING THE LOVE
BUT THE DEVIL DANCES DEEP IN YOUR HEAD
FILLING YOUR HEART WITH ALL KINDS OF DREAD
ANGELS SOAR IN AND THEY DO ATTACK
BUT SATANS MINIONS DO FIGHT THEM BACK
THE WAR IS FOREVER INSIDE YOUR MIND
JUST ONE GOOD THOUGHT YOUR HOPING TO FIND
NOTHING CAN SAVE YOU BUT JUST THY SELF
TAKE THEM OLD SINS OFF FROM THAT SHELF
OPEN THAT HELL AND LET OUT A SCREAM
FOR NOW YOU AWAKEN ,IT'S ALL A DREAM
Copyright ©
MILLER_GENUINE_SWINE
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2007-05-01 01:36:38]
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Re: DOUBLE DEVIL DELIGHT
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by BEE on
Tuesday, 1st May 2007 @ 05:11:05 AM AEST
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Wonderful write very good with expressing the feelings. Take a look at some of mine
BEE |
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Re: DOUBLE DEVIL DELIGHT
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by Gravehorn on
Tuesday, 1st May 2007 @ 05:57:09 AM AEST
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In line three, 'Rath' is spelled 'Wrath'. There were also a few other spelling and grammar mistakes, but for the most part it was a decent poem.
For future reference, PLEASE DONT CAPITALIZE EVERYTHING IN YOUR POEM, IT MAKES IT SEEM LIKE ITS BEING YELLED AND ITS HARD TO READ LIKE THAT. |
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Re: DOUBLE DEVIL DELIGHT
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by brew on
Tuesday, 1st May 2007 @ 11:45:05 AM AEST
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May the devil be banished from ones'soul....Take the angle and let it lead what the furture holds.....You know angels can do so......I know so well. Very good write, even tho its Dark........
Hugs
Brew~ |
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